Personalized first line compliments job

Personalized First Line Compliments For Cold Emails Project

A strategy that gained some popularity over recent years is attaching personalized compliments to every cold email you send. This is done to warm the lead up before stating the real purpose of the cold email.

I worked with a client between August 2021 to January 2023 on this personalized first lines project and we all got positive results.

Details Of Personalized First Lines Project

My client needed to stand out from the other cold email outreaches.

He was looking for a contractor to write the personalized first lines to emails that will be sent to business owners in the United States.

The guidelines to follow for writing these personalized first lines were:

– First line must be read naturally in perfect English

– Must not be written in formal language

– Must be so personalized that you couldn’t send to anybody else

– Average word count should be between 20 – 40 words

Personalized first lines project

Details of the First Lines Project

My client was having issues getting responses to his cold emails advertising his services. He eventually realized that starting off with a compliment is a much more effective approach. It shows the lead that you made time to research them before reaching out. He decided to reach out to find the best writer to execute this task.

I got the job and it was the start of a long and fruitful partnership. He sent me a list of leads with their details (LinkedIn, Website, Full Names, Roles, Company Names) and it was my job to research on each individual and craft a unique compliment that applied to them and them only.

He got a dramatic boost in response rate and was able to close more high-value contracts. The fact that we worked in 3 different years shows how valuable this service was to him.

 

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